Week 12 Story - Mordred Seizes the Throne
Caliburn - the sword of destiny, drawn from the stone of the king's court years ago by the now King Arthur, showing that he was the rightful heir to Uther Pendragon's throne. The sword itself represents control of Britain and its vassals, and Arthur closely guards it in his chambers at all times, save for intricate ceremonies such as knighting. Rumors in the court say that this manner of succession was a construction of the sorcerer Merlin, meant to protect the bloodline with his magic. Merlin himself is an enigma to put all others to shame - the son of a witch and an incubus with an ageless body and the ability to see all of time at a single moment, he operates only by offering his prophecy and assistance at unpredictable moments. One such moment was when Arthur was returned to the court so bloodied, they panicked to find a successor. More than one hundred children claiming to be Arthur's son suddenly came to light, from inside and outside Camelot. Merlin constructed what is now called the Blood Arc, a curious device which takes in the blood of two people, combines them, and illuminates if they closely related enough to imply succession, the brightness showing how direct the connection is. The device quickly showed that no true successors came to the court, so Agravain, acting as Chief Minister, established a regency until the king could heal.
The knowledge of the Arc began first as a curiosity, than quickly exploded into an obsession as it filled my head while I tried to sleep. The memories of the drowning ship, how my father prophesied my future, and my arrival at the court all seemed to further and further coalesce into one conclusion - that I perhaps truly am the son of Arthur, and thus his bane. After years of tormenting dreams, I needed to find evidence. Shortly after evening dinner, I quietly slipped out of the court and found a beggar with an infant son, and paid her to go to the court and claim the son as a successor right then. Arthur was quickly roused, and blood was drawn from each, and the child was shown to be obviously unrelated. As all of the tired, bloated courtesans exited, I remained, and used my dagger to cut my tongue and spat the blood into the arc. The whole room glowed bright red in an instant.
My training was concluded in half the time of the rest of the knight-candidates. I was knighted and named Chief Lieutenant of the Army, due to my obvious prowess in combat tactics and strategy. Shortly after the ceremony, I requested a private audience with the King - a privilege granted only to the Knights of the Round. The moment we were alone, I asked him to follow me to the Blood Arc, and requested to test my own blood. The king agreed with a roll of his eyes, and we cut our hands into the odd construction of brass and marble. Once again, the room began to glow. Arthur was first shocked, then jumped immediately into a look of denial. "This must have been fabricated in some way, perhaps Merlin's mischief once again. Out from here, Mordred!" he shouted, and I quickly made my exit, saying nothing. Neither of us spoke again of that night.
In the next half decade, few unusual events happened, beyond the Knights' obsession with recovering relics and proving their combat prowess. Arthur himself left Camelot twice as often as any Knight of the Round, with his questing combined with subduing of petty revolts making for a significant drain of his time in the court. In his absence, Sir Agravain tended to the government, Sir Lancelot to the Knights, and myself to the armies that remained. For most in the court, Sir Lancelot's betrayal and eloping with the Queen came with little surprise, as the bond between the two was obvious, and painfully so when the king was gone. Not a single courtesan was surprised as Sir Lancelot escaped to France to muster an army. The king raised an army twice as large, and brought an expeditionary force to bring the rogue knight to justice. To Agravain, he left control of the government and taxes. To me, he left Caliburn and control of the army. The moment word returned that Arthur had engaged with enemy forces in France, I took my proper seat on the throne.
Bibliography: Like the previous story, much of the exterior details of this story (Lancelot's going to France, Mordred's rise) come from the Vulgate Lancelot-Grail prose. A good secondary source for that story is the Wikipedia page for Guinevere, the queen.
Author's Note: This is an edited version of my third Storybook story, since it fit so well with the King Arthur theme. Most of what was cut was transitional details from the previous part.
The knowledge of the Arc began first as a curiosity, than quickly exploded into an obsession as it filled my head while I tried to sleep. The memories of the drowning ship, how my father prophesied my future, and my arrival at the court all seemed to further and further coalesce into one conclusion - that I perhaps truly am the son of Arthur, and thus his bane. After years of tormenting dreams, I needed to find evidence. Shortly after evening dinner, I quietly slipped out of the court and found a beggar with an infant son, and paid her to go to the court and claim the son as a successor right then. Arthur was quickly roused, and blood was drawn from each, and the child was shown to be obviously unrelated. As all of the tired, bloated courtesans exited, I remained, and used my dagger to cut my tongue and spat the blood into the arc. The whole room glowed bright red in an instant.
My training was concluded in half the time of the rest of the knight-candidates. I was knighted and named Chief Lieutenant of the Army, due to my obvious prowess in combat tactics and strategy. Shortly after the ceremony, I requested a private audience with the King - a privilege granted only to the Knights of the Round. The moment we were alone, I asked him to follow me to the Blood Arc, and requested to test my own blood. The king agreed with a roll of his eyes, and we cut our hands into the odd construction of brass and marble. Once again, the room began to glow. Arthur was first shocked, then jumped immediately into a look of denial. "This must have been fabricated in some way, perhaps Merlin's mischief once again. Out from here, Mordred!" he shouted, and I quickly made my exit, saying nothing. Neither of us spoke again of that night.
Sir Mordred |
In the next half decade, few unusual events happened, beyond the Knights' obsession with recovering relics and proving their combat prowess. Arthur himself left Camelot twice as often as any Knight of the Round, with his questing combined with subduing of petty revolts making for a significant drain of his time in the court. In his absence, Sir Agravain tended to the government, Sir Lancelot to the Knights, and myself to the armies that remained. For most in the court, Sir Lancelot's betrayal and eloping with the Queen came with little surprise, as the bond between the two was obvious, and painfully so when the king was gone. Not a single courtesan was surprised as Sir Lancelot escaped to France to muster an army. The king raised an army twice as large, and brought an expeditionary force to bring the rogue knight to justice. To Agravain, he left control of the government and taxes. To me, he left Caliburn and control of the army. The moment word returned that Arthur had engaged with enemy forces in France, I took my proper seat on the throne.
Bibliography: Like the previous story, much of the exterior details of this story (Lancelot's going to France, Mordred's rise) come from the Vulgate Lancelot-Grail prose. A good secondary source for that story is the Wikipedia page for Guinevere, the queen.
Author's Note: This is an edited version of my third Storybook story, since it fit so well with the King Arthur theme. Most of what was cut was transitional details from the previous part.
Hey Gage!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with this story. The Arthur legend has been one of my favorites for a long time, so I was excited that I got to read your own version of a story! I think you did a great job of keeping the tone and feel of the old Arthur text, while at the same time incorporating a second source and theme to add your own touch. Well done!
Best,
JD
Hey Gage!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with this story! I've never heard of this legend before and don't think I had the opportunity to read these stories this semester but I loved getting to learn a little bit about these tales through reading your story. You did such a great job keeping the essence of the story the same while still giving it your own twists. Great job!
Hey Gage,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed getting to read this story of yours! I also did the King Arthur reading this past week, and I was excited to get to connect with a story that I loved so much as a child and read other people' s perspective on a story. You stayed true to the themes and story while still making it your own, which is incredible! Great job!
Gage,
ReplyDeleteI love a good Arthur story. I haven't read the original story, but your story here makes me want to.
One small thing I noticed was your spelling of "than" in the second paragraph. Did you mean "then"? It was minor enough that it did not detract from the story, so you gucci.
Keep writing, because the stuff you have here is solid. See ya on Friday ;)
-Lance J.